it was ok, most pieces are slept on...

Topic: its somewhat not played, but it was clear n well structured.... got the reader

Wordplay: it was good, not over elaberitive n it wasnt to simple... it matched the piece and had complexity an it helped the structure... but it lacked emotion.. bad too

Flow: it worked with the piece, style is basic an played alot, but it was n ok read... for the piece it worked.. could of had more in it, seemed empty in places, like it was fading in an out alot....


Overall: 7/10


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