Yo, nice tracks, a lil feedback~>you get monotone in the intro of yo shit, need more emotion and ad libs need to be on point, its good all around, but you can be tighter, and i agree wit yung, about making whole songs, this is just lil snippets of battle verses,,

~Rhymes~, check my shit let me know wat you think,




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