I backed off only because love is my main fear.

^^ i argree this here is a great line, it could very well be the backbone of your piece

it was a simple message of a feeling ppl will face some time thoughout their life, maybe more then once, maybe always they will carry that feeling of being lost but you did a good job putting it into words and an alright piece.

i liked that intro to your piece, pieces that open up with questions, or soemthing interesting tends to pull ppl in its a major put of a piece and your intro was good.

I throw pebbles in it, and pretend the ripples grow,
i know this sea of love within me somwhere still flows

^^ this part how you compared your love or longing for love to the sea, and how you expanded on that i thought was really well done, it made it alive for us

Theres only one reason that my heart has cracked.
That reason is me, my mind and heart werent intact.

^^ at the end you started to relise or tell us the answers to many of your questions your proposed, so it didnt leave us with that what thats the end feeeling

waiting for a spark, to ignite inside and spread like a flame,
may god have mercy on my soul, and save me from my shame.

^^ and for the ending it was just as good as your intro

nice piece, also you had some good vocab in it and a soft smooth flow that fitted this piece, and you didnt over do the rhyme scheme didnt seem like they were forced worked well

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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