frozen wit heat- punches were there... not a bad spit.
your flow was on, and you had a bit of wordplay in there...
overall it was decent spit... i rate you at a 5

suicidal- I think your flow is suicidal, like it took a high dive
into a pool with no water... I could barely peice together a flow,
and you had no hard punches... def. need to elevate some...
but, you's a newb... it aint that bad, but you need to learn what
structure and flow is... go to tutorials.

vote- Frozen