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Old 10-15-03, 11:53 AM   #10
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tido.....

*And by the looks of things this bitch wants to be a gangsta, (avatar)
But hes a tike in this rap game, hes like the tot without the tater,*

this bar was not makin much sense, and did not flow well at all.

*But if i had a lamp i'd go back in time to slash your momas wrists,*

What does a lamp have to do with anything, I'm confused.

*I would of taken you to school but you couldnt make it to an ivy league,*

This is a reveresed punch, in my opinion. total=3/10
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Proficient Styles

*This guy’s style reeks of shit…If you ask me He shouldn’t engage in rap fights
Suckin Jackson’s and Tyson’s dick…is the only way that he could blow mike’s*

Thought this was wak at first, but the last line made it. nice.

*Tido,how the fuck are U gonna test..when ya punch lines av cataracts,people fail 2 see*

out of context here.

*I’ve heard you bitchin more than once…4 battles and none get voted on
Pervert, your fuckin nonce…that’s why in battles you get beaten on*

good personals, they just didn't work in the bar. nice attempt though. overall=5/10
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vote P.Stylez