Very well constructed piece!!.. It was alot better than previous ones by far.. Your lines had meaning

in SHOOL this fool must of DREW in DETENTION-
Cause your out~classed in rhyme, plus DRAW no attention

also some nice wordplay^^.. made an enjoyable read

..Your scheme was a bit basic though.. Maybe work on that a bit.. But overall this was good and the scheme was just a minor problem..Props

Feedback on my piece.. Make it detailed.. Either what you enjoyed of it and quaote the best or parts where i fell off.. Pz