in all honsetly liba ma...this seemed to me in the beginning like a Jessica Simpson song or something....lol...it was coo..their right...this kind of topcal structure isnt seen that much...or this looong....heh....i read quite a bit of it...i wont lie....im sure the rest are lying to you though....

to be real wit you ma...most cats wont wanna read a poem this long....you should find the strengths in your piece and find a way to summarize your thoughts without them being seen here as being repetitive....ya feel me....

igido

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RN Vs RB WAR!!....yr 2000...vet~~YEA I SAID VET!! WHAT YOU WANT ME TO PROVE IT? STEP THEN YOU FUCKING HOMO'S