http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636

Big Up BX..oh yea..feedback

Hmm, i didnt quite get the point of this, it started out like a biology lesson the turned into friendship...
flow was definetly a strong point, word choice and vocab well well done
the mulits were lacking, they were either 2 simple, or lacking in places

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636

(yes thats the same link 2x..no one ever responds)