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IP:
Locke
Unearth catilidge from his skin,broken bones run through, twist his words till I win/
^^decent..played though
Defient when he accpeted, never suspected a rap god lies in me, resurrected/
^^wack
C
ock whore, mouth open wide as a door, got herpes from fuckin on a bathroom flr./
^^cmon man...this is weak as hell..
Bitch fuck you and your skills, poppin pills for testing, make hair fallout to pay bills/
^^ok....punch?
Incrusted in a crevice of infactualization, turned 10 and went in prostitue inmates in/
^^this was decent, but too much repitition.
Forskin peeling on your brain, pndering ways to beat me, mind starting to strain/
Whoa, no, look, another homo, want me to call you a homo-hobo in slo-mo ho?/
^^um......no....flow was nice punch lacking
Restate your former confession, you bit off vannial ice in your first rap session/
^^cut your bars down, this should be made into one line with multis and another line with the same flow.....
Chirt got girls with looseness to boot, fuck loosness, they got air hangers to boot/
^^too much repitition..horrible flow
Rip your spine through your ass, competeing for this medal got you placeing last/
^^ok finisher
Overall-4/10
Chrit-
Leaving for a month? Still here? You just wont die right...
By more than a hair...
...I'll win this fight cause you're spit completely lacked highlights...
^^funny opener...but weak
Punk bitch... you come so wack I was expecting a *Style Switch!*
Enjoy it while your here...
...about to be locked out from elite, never appearing on the ill list
^^lol..this was nice..
Face down after this battle... Like Zimmer rushing Red Sox...
Punches rock ya neck... Leave the shit emulating pop rocks...
^^choppy flow..didn't like this bar
I'm glad to see ya only text... For that fact thank god!!!
Cause with your skill I'd hear a track and rip out my soundcard...
^^nice, solid punch
Not a free agent by choice but from lack of talent and the fact ya wack...
Hell you even got turned down... When Compton Records made a comeback
^^ok finisher...
Overall-decent verse...although I've seen much beter from you...good enough to win...6/10
Vote=chrit
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