Yo.... Both You My Homies So I'm Just Droppin Feedback...
Vicious Work On Structure... Punches Were A Tad Played But Not Horribly... Stop Usin "s To Identify Your Metas

Crunk... Holy Shit... You Done It Man... That Was ILL... But Take There Advice... Make Sure You Stick To Dissin Your Opponent... Use More Metas And You're Good To Go...

Great Battle

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation