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Old 10-16-03, 03:05 AM   #2
LaRyan Shabaz
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God damn... Nine's verse was, essentially solid.
It's good for a light chuckle, technically sound.

Jay's shit was... wheeeewww. I know people are new, maybe not so good. But this wasn't really a contest. Very simple rhymes, repetitive shit that didn't hurt. Clips and clip(er)s and man and man... bullshit.

It's cool to pretend like you're "keystyling" or coming quickly, but... when it's like this: try harder. Write some decent looking stuff.

Vote-Nine.