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Old 10-16-03, 10:23 AM   #13
Miami305
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This shit was off the chain. I love the reality writtens, specially comming from somone with skills. If I needed I would quote the whole verse, i c no flaws yet im going to show my fav. lines....

The fighting freezes me... I cant fathom the hatred...
Find out whether happiness or rage.. the drugs had made it...
^Dam..when i read that I was like Whoa.. why i didnt think of that.

Stoicism takes over... Conforming yet hiding myself...
Put on a smile but the whole time crying for help...
^Alot of people can relate to this, shit i can too. Gave me goosebumps.

Spent my life trying to meet others ideal perceptions...
Little did I know I'd grow to hate the reflections...
^DAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!! that second line is a classic


As the knife drew close... Someone stopped my lunacy...
Someone who felt my pain... Willing to work it through with me...
So in truth I lost acceptance... But this love's not a faze...
Foget the main streets... I'd rather exist in alley ways...
^WHOA!..that blew me away best part in entire verse.

Im loving this ya flow, wordplay is perfect not to advanced nor simple, you stayed on topic. I'll vote this a Classic yet with my 50 posts they'll laugh at me....

uno.
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