Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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liked!! it was a good piece the first time but you did make it better, and now its grand lol, it was a pure emotion piece, which the first time it did have as much as an emotion affect as this one, but this one upped the structure and flow some, it was a good read and congrats!
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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