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Old 10-16-03, 03:57 PM   #28
Aisle Phive
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Yo Honestly YWT19.. Jesus You Are A Herb.. You Didn't Kill Shit Cept Yo Chances Of Winnin. That Was A Fuckin Weak Ass Verse. Your To Ass For Frontlines.. And In Your Verse You Callin Yourself A Vet.. And Saying Your In LLL? Lmao.. Thats Why Evolve Rejected You.. And Ayo Illunitic.. Get Off His Nuts And Shit.. Dayum...


Anyway.. Rappad Had A Sub Par Verse.. You Had A Few Good Punchlines.. But You Really Hurt Yourself With The Setups.. And The Uneven Bars.. The Fact That You Came A Hair Better Than YWT Gets You My Vote.. Work On Your Setups And Structure.

YWT.. You Have Way Too Many Fillers.. There Was Total Lack Of Punches.. And The Wordplay Was Below Average. Setups Were Decent But Your Lack Of Punches Totally Killed Your Chances..


Vote-Rappadd... Both Elevate Seriously.. YWT You Have Had At Least 50 Battles.. Rappad Has Has Nearly 60.. You Guyz Need To Elevate Ya Though Process And Concentrate On Dissin The Opponet Rather Than Complementin Yaself..
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