where have you been!?? did you know you made the crew kid?? you have to stop in and take a look at the tryouts

this was yet again a great piece, you never fail!

it was kinda a scary to actually picture that but to have seen it OMG i would never sleep again.

you put this into a great piece, and got the story out well, held the attention the whole time throu, never a dull moment

even thou it was short that didnt matter coz in that time you got it out and in wasnt blank in spots it felt complet

the structure was the same as all your others, which works for this piece, and the flow worked also

good to see you back here

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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