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Old 10-16-03, 04:07 PM   #7
Key-Low
Presently Light...Waits
 
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From: Hayes, VA aka Haze-where its hard ta see
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ok, lets be honest.....this battle was nothing special, tha verses were merely solid, neither emcee had a good rhymes scheme, and most of tha tyme no solid flow, i liked tha similies in hi my name is verse betta, but Whitelightning told a betta story, tha twist was ok...even though it was merely another perception from another angle, you went from third person to first person W.L.

W.L. - rhyme scheme - 6, story - 7.5, flow - 6.5, total- 20
H.M.N.I. - rhyme scheme - 6, story - 6.5, flow - 7, total - 19.5

close battle, but my vote goes to W.L.
H.M.N.I you would have taken W.L. but you ruined it with tha end of your verse


try elevatin flow or rhyme scheme, i'm not hatin, just statin opinion, peep my ish, stay real, peace, 1
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