If i said this sucked.. Would you still go and give props for my work? I hope so.. Even if i said this was good.. Would you go and say truthfully what you thought of my work?.. Well i hope you'll critique honestly like I have

This had a good vocab with a solid flow and I liked the content and everyline related to the topic.. I understand this was done out of boredom and you actually turned it round to be original.. The topic was defintely unusual which was great..

Theres barely any members left to participate anymore//
On the board theres seven pieces,Both players engage in war//

thats my favourite line.. Pz