Mad Man- The storytelling was nice. It was clear that this was rushed, but it still had a certain good quality to it. I didn't quite understand how much time passed during the piece. Did he do all those drugs at that one party? Or did it happen over a longer period of time? Your flow was off, there were lots of unecessary words that made it shitty. The topic didn't come into play until the end, but it was a nice flip.

Sureal-Dope wordplay, I have to say, because I thought this topic required a story. I didn't think one could stick to it well enough by just writing. Lack of Multies, where there could have been tons. Better flow than Mad's. There was some nice symbolism, and I really liked the closing line.

Not a bad battle, for a one night stand.
vote- Sureal

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