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x this new style works pretty well for you, you had a nice verse, hard-hitting punchlines, flowed, well...decent wordplay, etc.
specialist had an ok verse, but how the hell are you 10-0? You have very poor structure, work on that...improve your punches and please do not type your verse in italics, makes them annoying to read.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85739
^^peep this