well potent that was very good again
good useage of words and got my attention throughout,
props on another well written verse.....

dez good beginner caught my attention from the start
i thought u were gonna go off and write how he comes back
and eats her alive or something..but nonetheless....dope.


props to both now dez go peep my piece getting slept on.

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MerK SquAd.

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