fuck these one line replys..


anyway, i felt that you added a fresh new twist on a semi-played topic. most people wouldnt have gone this route because futuristic themes tend to be harder to work with than something that is based in the current time setting. But, you pulled it off. Your imagery was beautiful, never did i think that 'this couldve been done better'.

abide by no rules our motto of greedyness applies to every man.
too bad it shortened our supplies, for our hungry wrong demand.

^ the closer was quite dope..its plain to see that you saved the best for last.