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This piece also hit me as well. Also hit me deep in my heart.
Waking up in the morning
age sixteen
looking in the mirror
and hating what you see
^This is something that always comes to my mind in the morning. Just staring at that reflection and hating everything you are.
Walking with your head down
starring at the floor
trying to keep up with their pace
but you cant take it anymore
things are quickly changing
but not for the good
and when you look in the mirror
its yourself you find blamming
^ I did that for so long. I would blame myself for so many things that I had no control over. t was like it was all my fault with what happened everyday, yet I had no control over what happened.
Scared to stand up for yourself
people saying things that arent true
everyone pushes you around
no one cares if your blue
^So true, yet so wanting to forget all of that pain that I endured. Seemed like no one cared what I did.
sleeping with your lights off
to hide from what you fear
crying yourself to sleep at night
because no ones around to hear
^reminds me of every night of pretty much my whole life.
dont want people to know your story
dont want them to see
that you dont live the life they do
you dont live so peacefully
^seems like you just want to hide everything and not let anyone inside to find out what you are truely like.
Slowly days are passing
hoping that things will finally change
holding on to that feeling
of once truly being loved
^Feeling the special warmth of true love, waiting for that love once again.
You feel so totaly lonely
you feel so totaly lost
even with all these people around
no one seems to hear your thoughts
^The feeling of being like you cant control anything and you just want to die because you are so empty inside.
Your always over looked
people pass you by without thought
just want to be noticed
have good friends, to feel a smile once again
^makes you feel as if no one cares, or ever did care about you.
Sorry for babbling on, but this piece really touched me. This is one of your best. Plain and simple, I loved it.
Keep writin. Luv and respect.
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