lmao @ your finisher in da hook...lol
"Sexy...we got what it takes to get u text heads open
Ain't it a bitch we've seen more pussies than trojans"

you had a good flow goin, kept a good rhyme scheme...
you had some good wordplay, and the emotion in this shit
was great... you elevatin yo'self quick... props... props...

~Ashy~