this was a good topic...sounds more like story line of ...lol..but it was dope..good vocab...n topic...and nice flow...and structure...keep dropin ya good open mics pot and ull keep elevatin..uve allready done it alot...good job playa...i liked this peice

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<center>Mike Albin</center><center>Oct 31,2003 Rest.In.Peace.Homie</center>

<center>Derek Raposa</center><center>Oct 31,2003 R.I.P.H</center><center>Your Both Missed Greatly..1 Luv</center>