*wonders if you wrote this for one of the pics posted* because it fits it well. this piece told a different story in one way but a played story another way, the story of wanting to be seen, wanting to be understood, but you showed it differently so it made it a good read. the only thing im saying is that too me all the rhyming you had over and over seemed to be a little too much.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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