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Old 10-17-03, 04:44 PM   #6
Tha Vision
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With shots on tha mark when I spark hitting tha left part of ya heart//
Fuck ya "bite" up when it "hits ya jaw" so "death starts when I bark"// *
What u think u hard cuz of that gun in ya avatar?//
"U can't see me", "Tha Vision leave u blind" and "mad at dark"//
Don't start, this fake bitch tryna act big cuz he uses "tenacious" words// **
"Making words," hoping people think they mistakened slurs// ***
MOF swear he creating verbs, now his words getting thinner//
And I'm still tryna figure out when glasses gave people splinters// ****
Since when did battles win cuz of "inners," u cant even "define ya rhymes"// *** and *****
U worked "full time" on ya verse and u still gonna leave with a "9 to 5"// ******

Explanations cuz there's a lot of personals in this shit and a few complex punches....
*I'm fucking his jaw up so he can't bite lines so now his rap career is over...
** He uses a lot of big words in his battles....
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now "my friend" u look "recitent" cuz ur raps are nothin like an "inefficient assistant"//
A line he used in one of his old battles and I never heard of or seen tha word "recitent" and I even looked in a couple of dictionaries and aint even find it...... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85095
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i break ur “glasses” and rub the splinters in ur “eyes” u lil “hyprocrite”//
Another line he's used and tha line aint even make sense.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85095
***** He uses a lot of multies and rhyme schemes in his battles but his flow is off a lot and he has no real nice punches....
******His record at tha moment is 9-4 and Imma make it 9-5 and working a 9 to 5 job is full time....
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