Thread: Jus Flowin
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Old 10-17-03, 07:45 PM   #4
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Originally posted by ChasinReveries
not bad...looks to me like just practice flowing, which is fine...some of ur rhymes don't really connect very well, but that will come with more practice...its good that u could stick to a topic, while u did this, for the most part...

keep truckin'
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yeah just practice and good luck in ya futue battles and keep droppin in here to get btter aight............

some of the lines didnt rhyme but its fine cuz next time ya drop will be a dime

see this rhymed and i was just talkin bout ya piece ya dropped....well keep a head up and keep droppin aight....
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