Well orikle. Though i felt you put too much 'pressure' on the rhyme scene. In another way it had it's own charms.

I liked the gentle imagery. It wasn't intense. Yet as you carried on through the piece. It built up into some fairly powerful.

It seemed to be about the greedy (and usually rich?) not being rewarded by god. Whilst the poor, who work honestly and with litle greeed. Get rewarded.

Or maybe not rewarded as such. But a matter of the rich n greedy live on hollow grounds. Little love. Whilst the poor, well you get th epoint.

Of course, the rich/poor thing could be of the soul. Intertwining the 'physical' state of richness with the inner 'spiritual' one. Er...

I didn't disect the piece as such. Went with the flow. And so therefore the meaning i got is a bit hazy.

Nice piece.

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