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Old 10-17-03, 09:19 PM   #10
Dirty Sally
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Your piece has a flow to it. And you picked a good topic, it was interesting enough to read. I would recommend adding metas and multies and your wordplay will improve as you write more. Stay active and you'll elevate....you show some potential...keep posting them open mics and choose topics you think people will be interested in reading.
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