All in All, this was rather wack, i mean, whats the point of dissing a label who'll never reply, pretty pointless waste of time if you ask me.

The first verse, didn't have alot to do with Murda INC as far as i could see. You used simplistic rhyme scheme, with simplistic rhymes, try to expand your vocab and use more complex meanings.

The 2nd verse did have some Disses to it, but the one which mentioned 'Blackchild' was weak,
"black child i haven't forgotten you//
with ya fat lips which can stick harder than glue//"

Th ehook was decent, nice relativity there. Don't think i'm hating, just tryin to help you become a better MC, Uses internals, better metas, expand your vocab. learn about wordplay.

Come up with a more original topic next time