this is basically about some kid at school, who bites more than a fat man. please give feedback as you can tell i aint exacly some 50 million quid rapper

i spit my lyrics so hard you might as well eat my flem/
who ya tryin to be some kind fatboy eminem/
i think every west side gangsta has been biten/
why dont you say something that you have actually written/.

your the worlds first 8 mile peadophile/
you try to emulate eminem you need your own style/
you bite so much your worse than vile/
if you were on the radio i'd definetly mess with the dial/.

i know its short but hey im still learning, so give me some feedback.