Thread: [Radical Minds]
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Old 10-18-03, 11:35 AM   #12
Dev
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i thought this was a good drop, your flow was on target and it was a decent subject so it kept me interested, it was a good length, the main thing i can pick out that i didn't really feel was the hook, thought 3x was too many, two would have done...overall though nice piece...........keep it goin!
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