this was some nice shit nigga. i was really feelin the topic, it looks like u put some time into it. your flow was sweet i was feelin the vocab and the wordplay. you had a tight rhyme scheme as well. nice flow nigga

my favorite lines

Arguments Evoked.. Hatred Provoked..
Said The Most.. With Hands Choked At His Throat..
He Pushed Him Off.. And Watched Him Fall..
Shot 3 Rounds Of The Gun.. Blood Stained Dry Walls..


hot shit nigga

holla