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Old 10-18-03, 02:52 PM   #10
Edicius
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It was nice, ...

But,.i think its better, ..when u not tellin ,

like:
My hypothesis is you'll die upon hearin' this
I'll affect you mentally with psychokinesis
I have more pistols than a developed plant
Only way you're comin' is wit' a penile implant

Its maybe me personal , ...but al and all this was an avarage, drop, ..u need to work on some aspects, ...it flowed ok, ...but the inner structure, ...looked to me ,..kinda ...messy....but still nice drop ..
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