Thread: ~~Become One with Reality~~Pt. 1 Unfinished very short..replies are needed.
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Old 10-18-03, 02:53 PM   #2
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definitly bein slept on...was short..i think you could up your vocan and multies try like 16 sylabls a line or something, try and get more imaginary and creativity...make it more indepth and make pople wonna feed off of it..na'mean? good sit though peace
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