good drop, nice simple flow, good vocab, try and use a few more multis, i liked the way u set it out,

my fav bit:

Glinted cold..B'cos values are mixed up to that of reality
If you pay with counterfit values it detracts from vanity
Its stashed in cavities cuz it's never started building ontop
There fowarding to deduct and never is it yeilding to stop

overall good drop, ill look out for more of your stuff,

return the favour and check out my Gladiator piece, its somewhere on the front page,

peace