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This was a dope piece dawg, even though it was only about 1 verse long it really made me picture the Collisium, the emotion and the intensity of it all. You stayed on the topic well, it's a relativly original drop, i've not seen another topic like this in Open Mic so far..
Bars like:
"Wife turned widows...children forced to bury their father,
women weep...but the gladiators cry much harder," ... "Slaves forced to fight...to satisfy romes lust for blood,
By that night...remains of corpses buried in the mud,"
- really showed your true ability. You have killa vocab and you ability to make me feel the emotion was real!
Overall: 4/5, it was a dope drop dawg, not much wrong with it, amybe a bit longer next time?
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