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Old 10-18-03, 04:05 PM   #9
Chrit
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From: Elevated beyond Description
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so the board pisses you off... bores you to death, ok pause,
and this is the same fuckin board... you got 16 names registered on..?!
Not bad... kind of a fake personal... but good
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iight J, you'll throw 20, but it's high time to leave,
and don't try channelin ya anger, no one needs lifetime tv.
kinda missed this punch....
this guy survive me? he's tame n irrelevant,
plus the vagina monologues run on Jay's stages of development.
lmao at line 2 ... good shit
put the gauge to ya helmet bitch, you a geek dude n homo,
ya only ranked #1 the first time due to dq's n' no shows.
good personal....
so hoe, we're surprised you showed, I was hopin you'd die,
cause when ya talent peak's in audio... it got poked in the eye.
not bad..... not the best...
treat ya girl's pussy like baseball when I'm layin hoes,
cause when she pops flys her shits deep but playable.
LMAO.... great bar here.....
I'll provide plenty of ammo n' slay without sorrow,
& yes ya styles ahead of it's time... since garbage day is tomorrow.
Ill punch... very nice
gave an appearance of talent but all Pan did was con amateurs,
while I'll put this bitch on this ice faster than Michelle Kwan's manager.
Nice punch.....
ya beyond ridin, takin my lines... I aint resortin to lies,
cause you livin on Island since Back to the Future... guess I'm Lorf of the Flies.
Nice... doubt some of the young kids on here will get it tho...
rampage ya life, left for dead with the rude confessional,
That Jay's career's goin downhill... faster than luge professionals.
Nice closer

Good verse... picked up as it went along.....


First Kid In A While That Showed Against Me, You Got Some Balls...
But You Rise To Tha Occasion Slower Than Dicks On Viagra. . Falls...
Nice second line... set up was a little weak
All Prayers And No Miracles, Like He Wrote His Verse In The Vatican...
He Runs Through More L's Than Rice Runs Through Unfortunate Africans...
nice punches here...
Face Your Destruction, You're The Bruisee and I'm The Bruiser...
He's Known For Isolation, 'Cuz No One Likes A Loser...
weak here....
Blame Evolve For Your Loss, I Keep Tha Wins On Lock...
I Had Your Chances Yanked Long Before This Punch Left You Socked...
kinda weak again....
His Punches Are Played More Than My Marvin Gaye 8-Track...
He Tried To Be Original, Obviously He Didn't Make Tha Cut And Stayed Back...
First line was nice... second was kinda weak again...
In Fact He's Known For That, He Ought To Be Used To Rejection...
If British Knights Is His Crew I Guess They Up And Left Him.
Decent personal.... not great but not bad...
I Would've Asked Him To Come Hard Against Me, But He's Not Lyrically Inclined...
His Chances Of Winning Has Tha Same Outcome As His Try Out For Merk Squad...DECLINED!!!
dont really see how the second line was personal... never tried out for MS....

Overall decent verse... really slowed down towards the middle...
Soem non-punches in there too...


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