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Old 10-18-03, 05:21 PM   #5
Dev
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prov, your verse was pretty way, there just wasn't any flow to it and your punch lines were weak

[your like a damn camel when you send a verse and your spittin-it,
expect nothin but wackness from this man's verse but im hittin-it,]

to open a battle you want a strong line, this is terrible,... rhyming the same word!......

må®vë£öµs your verse ahd better structure and slightly harder hittin punches, so i would give the vote to you, but both of you need to elevate sum........
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