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Old 10-18-03, 09:48 PM   #4
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aw! naw, it's Jim-Dog, country boy raw, big 30lbs. balls
remix to this mutherfucker with a dirrty south style

^^^LOL^^
But the end of that line diden't really rhyme too well.The begging was funny as hell.Your flow was on point,try some metties vocab and wordplay.Try and listen and i'll try my best to break down multis for you.

Multis r multiple rhymes within one of your bars.
Ghat-this-vet i read his verse and i start to wonder if this kid is quacking-yet
^^Ya know stuff like that
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