Yo,
This was a decent poem,on the real.Good poem for your first one.It was also to a hard topic but you help your own.Like lady D said i diden't really understand it the first time reading but then i read it a second time and it was good.Yeah English is cool,let's me get emotional you know how it goes,but i hate those crappy-a$$ topics they give you and then they expect some A+ work out of you.
~stay up