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Old 10-19-03, 03:48 AM   #6
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Re: Alright.. Look...

IP:

okay....i was asked to vote fairly on this which i always do..bare
in mind i have no beef wit MM and knight is on my top 10 list
for cats i like.....regardless....i'm just gonna come real...so here
it is....

Knights Verse

I wrote the BluePrints For this Battle and yes.. Your Defeat Was Planned,
Come on, murdera's going through some hard times.. I guess he Just Needs a Man!
not bad opener...it was okay
When I Drop You I'm Accidentally Breakin Your fall, just be glad These Balls Saved You,
Mystery... Only reason you're the "Barz Of War Champ" is cuz you know We've All Played You!
lol....good personal and use of wordplay
He's just stating Un-necessary Words, Renditions of what he Thught Were Rhymes,
How he gunna beat me? mystery's more Played than "The KnightShade has Bit" Lines,
nice...way to flip the script also
Alright look... You know mystery's Biting.. His skill level Varies Each Day,
When it comes to wackness, M~M's like KidNapped Children, He gets too Carried Away,
again...good wordplay..decent punch
mystery.. I wanted to Visit Your Child Cuz I was Missin Mah Kid..
I Asked this queer to Give Me A Beat and Look What He Did..
no...i didnt really like this one at all...seriously
You Dope And Ill With Heroine Infested Needles, Coughin STDs But You still lack the Sickness,
If I wanted a Wack Verse I'd Simply Copy Yours, You were Mistaken,
i got lost here...can't pick up the rhyme scheme
They Were Talkin About My Verse When They Shouted Your Name,
This battle was Well Done, You Got BURNED , Kid Only Hoped to get Toasted,
Bringin Tha Heat! The Only Way This Battle Would Be ILL Is if this Fag Never Posted,
that setup threw me off...shit ain't even rhyming now...but i
finally caught back unto the rhymes on the second line all the way
to the punch...the punch is pretty played...bad

Symbolically I RIP STYLES! And Yours Is Like Paper,
I'm TEARIN the FACTS in LINES Just to get your FAC-TORS Straight,
Now I know y'all just Lying to yourselves if you think this Rapper's Great...
again..ur rhyme scheme is really messin me up....and i'm just
not feelin it...honestly

When My Lyrics Hit You Like Caffiene I'm bout to Stain Him with Rhymes,
The Audience is Like Selfish Brain Donors cuz Nobody's PAy'N-iM No Mind.......
not bad closer...decent




Mystery Murdera's Verse

What Am I Confused?! Time To Leave This Blow Whole Scattered
Ur tricks aren't good, they're average: LIKE SHRINKIN UR TEXT TO FORCE A FLOW PATTERN
good opener...but seriously...that is feeding off of his verse...
and u know it too...that has definately got to end ...ur elite..

Every Hott Line You Stole That AND You Aint Never Been Great
Complete Mismatch... I'm Godspoken n Knightshades Just A Sin-Say!
lol...that was pretty decent...kinda funny...good wordplay
U Been Gay! Used To Rep Productions I'm The Rose That Grew Out
I Mean Damn How ya Boy Chrit Make An Elite List That Left U Out?!
personal and also hard punch...i felt it
Best Be Out, Come On KnightShade No Use n U Spittin
12 apostles... But U Battled 13th disciple n he Proved He Existed AND U DIDNT!
that was pretty good...i can't front...and personally...thanks
for the props...lol

1 Per Battle Right Now Ur Below Average - but Thats Expected
Funniest Thing bout Ur crew: Erybody BUT U elevated n Left it!!
wow..again wit a harsh personal and punch...seriously
Stop Stressin, Rise Again, We'll Give U Attention Again One Day
But Do Me A Favor, ay?...
On Day 2, Dont make us force you like last time, Just Walk Away
umm..yeah...personals just keep comin...decent also
Stalk my Prey, break Your Back -Wait- U Aint Gotta Spine To Lose
Fake n whack, Thought Personals Went Behind The Headline Newz
nice metas....eh..on the punch
A Crime To Lose?! Double Convict - U Been Caught Once For Bitin
N DAMNIT STOP LYIN!!! u didn't elevate - u just Dropped ya hyphens
lol...cute...nice.....not bad at all
n Everybody Knows U Bit... But I'ma Have To Rip U The Hardest
Knightshades the Only MC To Drop A Solo CD Labeled: VARIOUS ARTIST!!!!
lmao...this was fuckin nice...i can't front at all...this was a good
ass bar...like whoa

Wish U Would Drop An album So I could own u twice n Play U Back
Suicide Note - Murk The Mystery Myself n Leave the Solution of











Knightshades Whack!!!

blah closer...i woulda stuck wit the various artist thing....




okay...here it is.....Knight...i just wasn't really feelin it mayne....
i seen like 1 or 2 at the most good punches...other than that...
the rest of it was blah...MM...i'm impressed....there was like 1 or
2 punches that i considered weak or just okay....but the rest
hit hard...u had some good metas and wordplay in there also..
and like i said...that one bar..that i woulda used as the closer was
sweet...so my vote is going to Mystery Murdera.....


Knight...i still luv you sweet cheeks



vote=Mystery Murdera
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