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Old 10-19-03, 06:29 AM   #3
RythmicTendicies
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Avah Noo
You ahd nice flow, it was a little choppy in some places but overall it was pretty smooth. You certainly have a good vocab and it showed here, you used it well, you didn't use an excessive amount of it, you played it well.
Best Bar
"Setting's picture-esque - our thoughts excel through towns & minds
Bloody clashes spill from our brains 'til they deluge down our spines
"


Potent
You flow was of da chain, you had nice internals gtoo. You didn't use such an array of vocab but you made up for it with your bars, i felt they had more meaning, more complexity.
Best Bar
"The so called real McCoys & now has established a new empire
The desire to take it is more than that of burning a fire & retire"


Edicius
You had the more personal feel towards the topic. You put yourself in an vunerable position and basically just said: "Fuck You All". You had good internals and the bars were a nice length, wheras i felt Avah's were a bit long. You stayed on flow and you seemed to have a deeper message behind it.
Best Bar
"Multiple doubts, ....when i was spreadin, i wrote,
'get other hobby'collect stamps,not close to dope."


Overall
4/5, this was a dope song, you coulda used a hook which would've probably made me give a 5/5 but it was still dope, y'all should be 'proud'.
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