okay..

knightsade id break it down but the cat two posts up broke it down perfectly...

so what i thought of your verse - it was aite i guess.. i hvent seen any of your battles before but im betting you used to be a lot better than this. some bars seemed forced, (the smaller text too to force the flow it seemed)... punches w/ played concepts.. (such as the just dont post ur verse one). other than that it was just average.

M~M:

dope punches and set-ups..
nice personals.
esp liked the elite list one and the 2nd to last one.
you took the battle fairly easily.

vote- MM