Wordplay - Iceman
Punches - Iceman
Personals - Iceman
Flow - Neither were really to on point with the flow
Multis - None
Metas - Iceman
Creativity - Neither
Enjoyment - Iceman

Cold, you need to learn how to integrate multi's and wordplay into your verse. You'll never get votes if all your punches are basic with no wordplay. Multi's help the flow and enjoyability of the read a lot too.

Iceman, you also need to integrate multi's....your structure was nice, but the flow was extremely choppy. I like that you're using wordplay, but almost all your punches were played. Try and be a little more creative next time.

Vote ~ Iceman