Yeah like he said^^you're whack.You had way too many multis horrible wordplay with the "rap" and "wrap".You need to up your metties,vocab&wordplay some of your lines diden't really make sense at times.
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yo, Forever-im-signed to severin-minds that are never-inclined to be as clever-as-mine,
if there was ever-a-time i lost-to-you its cause i was dazed like a prostitute lost-in-a-maze,
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^^^That made no sense^^
It also seemed a lil forced in my view.You need to just let things flow off the top of your head.
That'll be all
Overall rating:
-5/10