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Old 10-19-03, 11:05 AM   #2
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This is rather beautiful Chasin, simplistic writing at its best. And simplistic isnt an insult believe me... I like that you didnt feel the need to dress this up with intrical rhyme schemes and long winded words.. The emotion still shines through.

i will break free,
find the key
to my heart,
and find...
me.......

Nice ending, great read.. Thanks
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