Thread: World War
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Old 10-19-03, 11:06 AM   #5
redragon
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Hmm,
Well for one thing your structure was off,way off.It was hard to read.
Also work on your vocab and wordplay try some metties too.You had flow&you stayed on topic.
Overall:5/10
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