Thread: "Life" (keystyle)
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Old 10-19-03, 11:09 AM   #3
rule
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pretty good, a lot of inspiration, a good piece but i thnik you could have done better, but good wordplay and flow, andnice peicve to read wen ya feel like givin up...keep it up
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