listenin to beat, damn, I feel like goin outside and throwin a family reunion to this track, get the grill goin. cookin some bbq chicken namean
verse 1- starts out really nice, laid back. explainin how the day goes, very nice. movin like a fair fight, keep the hits equal<<<word
I like how you use delivery, old school style. the structure and all the laid backness
chorus really laid back, love it
2nd verse-lmao when you do the "whoo" you sound like will smith, only thing. but it's crazy I'm lovin it like mc donalds
3rd verse-this shits tight as fuck I"m just meltin to the track now, and this outro's pretty nice to
I realize your vocals are low, but I'm sure that's just cuz of the lo-fi. I bet it's just fine if you d/l it.
5/5-you did everything perfect for this beat, the style, delivery, lyrics, nice wordplay and shit. feelin it. som'm to do in your ride. reminds me of some tupac/snoop/dre shit in their goood days. very nice, i'm a play this to my boy, he loves old school, I'll hit you up with his feedback later
well that's it, *kiss on the cheek*, you got my number, make sure to call me
